'Red Light' by Good Shout

(London, UK) Second Edit

Red Light was made with no budget on a Canon 60D with 3 dedo lights, some gels and 2 LED panels and a Zoom H4N microphone.

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Comments: 1
  • #1

    Samantha Hughes (Thursday, 13 December 2012 21:45)

    Haha, didn't see that coming!
    A very clever little piece, beautifully edited and I love the music. Nicely done.

'Red Light' by Good Shout

(London, UK) First Edit

First cut: Producers notes for the filmmakers

  • Loose fades at head, just cut, will be more dynamic
  • Overal try and tighten, it’s a long time for the gag to sustain without people guessing it
  • Great work!
Comments: 7 (Discussion closed)
  • #1

    Adolf El Assal (Sunday, 04 November 2012 14:01)

    great cinematography and acting!! one of my favourites so far. the only thing I would suggest: cut out the fades at the beginning and have a few more shots in the intro to build up the tension. great job!:-)

  • #2

    Giles (Monday, 05 November 2012 13:27)

    Liked it but you don't need the OTT car driving start. Its enough to start on with lights changing.

    Also I think you missed a trick. You need to make the audience misunderstand his flirting more with him being pleasured - earlier on in the sequence.

    Not sure if I totally believe the end after thinking about the early build up.

  • #3

    Stephen Cooper (Monday, 05 November 2012 21:33)

    Really enjoyed that. To be honest I wouldn't change anything. The OTT start was a little off putting at first but when the joke hits at the end it all works really well together.

  • #4

    Carl (Thursday, 08 November 2012 17:34)

    Can't stop laughing! Great job!

  • #5

    Rocko Paolo (Friday, 09 November 2012 15:11)

    Great job. The music really fits perfectly and the main actor's facial expressions in this little to no dialogue type short says more! I didn't quite get the whole "puke" sound at 1st but guess it ties in at the end. :-)

  • #6

    Taylor (Sunday, 18 November 2012 12:38)

    Really liked this - but felt it too long and needs to be cut drastically. Well shot.

  • #7

    Douglas Caldow (Friday, 23 November 2012 20:42)

    When the ending rolled around I genuinely thought the whole thing was brilliant. Wasn't sure till then.