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• #1

  Jaye (Friday, 20 July 2012 18:59)

  Quite enjoyed the rapid fire banter, could really picture it.

• #2

  Martin White (Friday, 20 July 2012 19:13)

  Annie Hall immediately sprung to my mind when reading this. Not that that is a bad thing as its one of my favorite films of all time. This could work really well as a film too though.

• #3

  Steven JC Johnson (Friday, 20 July 2012 20:07)

  Enjoyed that. And an ice cream would work for me too... :)

• #4

  P. (Sunday, 22 July 2012 19:45)

  Hmm. I'm dubious of all the 5* ratings of this, it's rather average. The dialogue isn't great and feels very artificial. Didn't do much for me, sorry.

• #5

  Ian Armer (The Writer!) (Sunday, 22 July 2012 23:23)

  Dear P (If that is your real name!)
  
  I don't go for the friends/family voting system - it's dishonest. Some people honestly like my script, some honestly don't. It's okay to find it average too! :)
  
  Thanks to everybody who has bothered to read it so far!
  
  Ian :)

• #6

  Nigel Sheppard (Monday, 23 July 2012 14:10)

  Quite enjoyable I thought, very difficult to get something across in two pages but you did tell an entire story with it. Well done, and unlucky for not making it.

• #7

  Ian Armer (Monday, 23 July 2012 21:30)

  Many thanks, Nigel! And again, many thanks to everybody who has taken the time to read it (even if you didn't like it!) :)