The Dumb Waitress by Merlin Ward

After confusion over sexuality, a waitress appears to mix up two male companion’s orders to the amusement of the older man who sets things up for the perfect Valentines kiss.
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Comments: 7
  • #1

    Martin White (Friday, 20 July 2012 19:09)

    Haha hilarious script. Well done Merlin!

  • #2

    Steven JC Johnson (Friday, 20 July 2012)

    Excellent. Great dialogue and a funny climax. Nice one. :)

  • #3

    Jaye (Saturday, 21 July 2012 17:52)

    I laughed out loud a couple of times - the dialogue was brilliant, I could just picture poor old Matt!

  • #4

    Mitch (Sunday, 22 July 2012 17:46)

    An early blog post from the readers stated there were two oft repeated factors: set in restaurants and a gay theme/twist.

    I can only imagine that ticking both boxes was what lead to this one not making it. Coz it's a lovely script. 50 better than this? We'll see, but wouldn't have thought so. 500? Definitely not.

  • #5

    Milethia (Monday, 23 July 2012 10:47)

    Great, witty script. Moved really quickly. Funny. Good luck with whatever you choose to do with it next.

  • #6

    Nigel Sheppard (Monday, 23 July 2012 14:42)

    Reminds me of The Prestige. Did make me smile, good effort!

  • #7

    Merlin Ward (Wednesday, 25 July 2012 11:29)

    Thank you for all your kind comments and for taking the time to read my script. Every writer has self-doubt, voices that gnaw away at the brain, so your comments have restored my confidence in my ability. I wish you all the very best with your 50 Kisses scripts and other projects ...and dreams.