Gritty,real,easy to produce and unfortunate as it is, this could be done by a Brit, an Aussie, US, any of the countries with forces abroad. Believable in many aspects. Good job.
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Tammy George(Monday, 30 July 2012 19:58)
This is by far the best story line from a personal point of view, how much has she seen that was detached, or not real because it was all people she didn't know? Very strong.
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Kim Granger(Monday, 30 July 2012 20:00)
When my professor said read this and let's discuss it I thought she was a couple fries short of a happy meal but this drove her point home. Simple and concise. Done right it could attract the men and
not just be a chik-flik.
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Carissa(Tuesday, 31 July 2012 01:41)
Thanks peoples- Corey I appreciate the note & I figure anything of mine that gets done- I'll have to do it all so...
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Tara Marie (Monday, 30 July 2012 19:22)
Wow! I could picture that so clear. Amazing.
Ray Amonde (Monday, 30 July 2012 19:46)
Gritty,real,easy to produce and unfortunate as it is, this could be done by a Brit, an Aussie, US, any of the countries with forces abroad. Believable in many aspects. Good job.
Tammy George (Monday, 30 July 2012 19:58)
This is by far the best story line from a personal point of view, how much has she seen that was detached, or not real because it was all people she didn't know? Very strong.
Kim Granger (Monday, 30 July 2012 20:00)
When my professor said read this and let's discuss it I thought she was a couple fries short of a happy meal but this drove her point home. Simple and concise. Done right it could attract the men and not just be a chik-flik.
Carissa (Tuesday, 31 July 2012 01:41)
Thanks peoples- Corey I appreciate the note & I figure anything of mine that gets done- I'll have to do it all so...