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• #1

  Elaine (Friday, 27 July 2012 11:11)

  Wow, it starts off as a gentle story then accelerates into violence and chaos. Interesting.

• #2

  Phil (Friday, 27 July 2012 11:25)

  Kept me interested 'till the end, good job

• #3

  J Westside (Friday, 27 July 2012 11:26)

  Gripping stuff! This guy is going to be huge!

• #4

  Terry (Friday, 27 July 2012 11:38)

  Absolutely awesome scriptwriting. Bravo.

• #5

  Ramin (Friday, 27 July 2012 11:42)

  Like it, nice twist at the end. Is this the same guy who wrote 'Depth Charge'?

• #6

  Dixita (Friday, 27 July 2012 11:59)

  Fantastic script and I just wanted to find out what happens at the end. Also very romantic! It's like as the riot became more intense, so did their love.

• #7

  Bav (Friday, 27 July 2012 12:07)

  The author has used his craft to beguiling effect, a compelling script that intrigues until the very last word... great stuff!

• #8

  Pio (Friday, 27 July 2012 13:26)

  This is excellent! A great read, especially with a cup of hot chai!

• #9

  francesca (Friday, 27 July 2012 14:31)

  nice, nice, nice! romantic view of love far away from clichè!
  

• #10

  Tom P (Saturday, 28 July 2012 14:45)

  Top work

• #11

  Asha (Sunday, 29 July 2012 01:57)

  Superbly written!

• #12

  Stephen B (Tuesday, 31 July 2012 18:13)

  I really liked this one. It starts out quite kitchen sink but then builds to a thrilling and romantic cresendo. Notting Hill meets the Hackney Riots!

• #13

  Craig P (Friday, 03 August 2012 13:32)

  I think the only reason this didn't get through was because of the firebombing and riot police challenge in regards to the film making.
  
  Really liked the ending - in the pandemonium that he still wished her happy valentines day.