Great twist at the end, good little script. With a few tweaks could be a fun comedy. The girl stomping off at the end was too typical, Nan should have been given the punchline, but well done.
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sarah(Saturday, 11 August 2012 11:50)
Great, really enjoyed it, should of made the top 50.
Gwyn (Sunday, 12 August 2012 05:52)
Great twist at the end, good little script. With a few tweaks could be a fun comedy. The girl stomping off at the end was too typical, Nan should have been given the punchline, but well done.
sarah (Saturday, 11 August 2012 11:50)
Great, really enjoyed it, should of made the top 50.