A really good read, your writing style made it really easy to feel what Annie was feeling all the way through; excitement, love, confusion, grief... could go on!
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Alex Straker(Tuesday, 21 August 2012 23:19)
A really heartbreaking ending - although we know something is wrong when he comes in, it still takes us by surprise when the revelation comes. I felt as crushed as those roses did...
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Ellyn Heeley (Sunday, 19 August 2012 20:45)
A really good read, your writing style made it really easy to feel what Annie was feeling all the way through; excitement, love, confusion, grief... could go on!
Alex Straker (Tuesday, 21 August 2012 23:19)
A really heartbreaking ending - although we know something is wrong when he comes in, it still takes us by surprise when the revelation comes. I felt as crushed as those roses did...