Nice set-up and satisfying pay-off which made me laugh.
#5
Gareth Hughes(Monday, 30 July 2012 13:30)
great self-contained little story.
#6
Helen Barnes(Tuesday, 31 July 2012 11:09)
Really enjoyed it. Little Bernie reminds me of someone I know!
#7
Barnes Owl(Tuesday, 31 July 2012 11:14)
Great short with added bite! Most likely based on the early life of the great John Rooney.
#8
Stuart Anderson(Tuesday, 31 July 2012 18:14)
I loved this made me laugh out loud. Would love to hear more of Bernie!
#9
Maz(Tuesday, 31 July 2012 18:17)
Well written, felt I knew and loved Bernie from the very beginning.
#10
Mrs Brown(Wednesday, 01 August 2012 12:38)
Like to hear more of little Bernie, I think she would do well on my show, with the boys.
#11
Louise Dore(Wednesday, 01 August 2012 15:46)
Raised a little giggle, but also made me think back to that idolisation of authority, that first little disillusionment, and when do we stop biting back? A lot to enjoy from a little vignette.
#12
Aidan Miners(Sunday, 05 August 2012)
Very good, Simon. You have seemingly picked up a lot about the Catholic Church from Greg and Father Ted (oh, and the Ducie of course).
#13
WholeHogg(Monday, 27 August 2012 18:28)
Great stuff Mr. Mitchell. Poignant, funny, well-written and easy to visualise. Damn - you one talented man.
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Louise McCooey (Tuesday, 24 July 2012)
Very enjoyable and sweet, it got a smile.
Laura Dishington (Tuesday, 24 July 2012 16:03)
That's great. Light touch and very whimsical.
Simon (Monday, 30 July 2012 12:07)
Thanks Louise and Laura!
Nigel (Monday, 30 July 2012 12:47)
Nice set-up and satisfying pay-off which made me laugh.
Gareth Hughes (Monday, 30 July 2012 13:30)
great self-contained little story.
Helen Barnes (Tuesday, 31 July 2012 11:09)
Really enjoyed it. Little Bernie reminds me of someone I know!
Barnes Owl (Tuesday, 31 July 2012 11:14)
Great short with added bite! Most likely based on the early life of the great John Rooney.
Stuart Anderson (Tuesday, 31 July 2012 18:14)
I loved this made me laugh out loud. Would love to hear more of Bernie!
Maz (Tuesday, 31 July 2012 18:17)
Well written, felt I knew and loved Bernie from the very beginning.
Mrs Brown (Wednesday, 01 August 2012 12:38)
Like to hear more of little Bernie, I think she would do well on my show, with the boys.
Louise Dore (Wednesday, 01 August 2012 15:46)
Raised a little giggle, but also made me think back to that idolisation of authority, that first little disillusionment, and when do we stop biting back? A lot to enjoy from a little vignette.
Aidan Miners (Sunday, 05 August 2012)
Very good, Simon. You have seemingly picked up a lot about the Catholic Church from Greg and Father Ted (oh, and the Ducie of course).
WholeHogg (Monday, 27 August 2012 18:28)
Great stuff Mr. Mitchell. Poignant, funny, well-written and easy to visualise. Damn - you one talented man.