Couple of things, Thomas. You might want to run this by an English translator to present it in idiomatic English. It comes across as very stilted.There is far too much information given in the
direction, such as Marc's education and his medical history, the same goes for the educational backgrounds of his friends. Lastly - you don't actually have to squeeze fifty filmed kisses into the
script to meet the criteria.
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John (Sunday, 29 July 2012 20:14)
Couple of things, Thomas. You might want to run this by an English translator to present it in idiomatic English. It comes across as very stilted.There is far too much information given in the direction, such as Marc's education and his medical history, the same goes for the educational backgrounds of his friends. Lastly - you don't actually have to squeeze fifty filmed kisses into the script to meet the criteria.