The last thing Mae wants to do on Valentine’s Day is visit her dying grandmother, but after an evening together Mae comes to terms with their final goodbye
I loved this one... maybe they thought the setting might put filmmakers off as its a culture that's been convincingly portrayed so often, it's hard to fake on film (provided it wouldn't be made by
Italian Americans).
Lovely ending too. I wonder if a British version would have fared differently (or worked so well). Well done.
That started out sad and went to sweet. I wonder why it didn't make the long list. I really liked how she sent the taxi away for an extra hour with her grandmother.
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Lisa(Thursday, 02 August 2012 09:26)
Gosh, I think it's lovely. I didn't quite follow the jump cuts, though. Perhaps one moment of tenderness or sentimentality may have served you better here, as the unforgiving 2 pages have made your
script seem a little bit disjointed to me. But I really love the understated tone, and it hasn't come across cheesy, which it easily could have.
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Mitch (Sunday, 29 July 2012 16:52)
I loved this one... maybe they thought the setting might put filmmakers off as its a culture that's been convincingly portrayed so often, it's hard to fake on film (provided it wouldn't be made by Italian Americans).
Lovely ending too. I wonder if a British version would have fared differently (or worked so well). Well done.
ShaunaJ (Monday, 30 July 2012 16:55)
That started out sad and went to sweet. I wonder why it didn't make the long list. I really liked how she sent the taxi away for an extra hour with her grandmother.
Lisa (Thursday, 02 August 2012 09:26)
Gosh, I think it's lovely. I didn't quite follow the jump cuts, though. Perhaps one moment of tenderness or sentimentality may have served you better here, as the unforgiving 2 pages have made your script seem a little bit disjointed to me. But I really love the understated tone, and it hasn't come across cheesy, which it easily could have.