I thought this was quite beautiful. It had the kiss, it was very visual and I found myself asking some questions. Contemplative and provoking. Unlucky not to get through.
The screenplay was thought provoking and was unique. Only issue I had with it was with the formatting. Good job on bringing a thought provoking unique story to the masses. It really makes one think
about what the Man says.
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Sarah Deane (Monday, 23 July 2012 20:33)
I thought this was quite beautiful. It had the kiss, it was very visual and I found myself asking some questions. Contemplative and provoking. Unlucky not to get through.
Mike Fraser (Monday, 23 July 2012 21:47)
The screenplay was thought provoking and was unique. Only issue I had with it was with the formatting. Good job on bringing a thought provoking unique story to the masses. It really makes one think about what the Man says.