A story of unquestionable and unconditional love between a young girl and her adoring father as the two search the shelves for the perfect Valentine's card for their mother/wife
Nice story. If I could add a constructive criticism I would say that I missed a punch moment or a punch line. Maybe it could help you to put it through. (I guess I also failed in this point). But it
is a tender story, though.
Best,
Márcia
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Márcia Mateus (Wednesday, 25 July 2012 02:01)
Nice story. If I could add a constructive criticism I would say that I missed a punch moment or a punch line. Maybe it could help you to put it through. (I guess I also failed in this point). But it is a tender story, though.
Best,
Márcia