This missed the brief by not being set on Valentine's Day.
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Martin White(Monday, 23 July 2012 15:44)
Opps yeah I may forgotten about adding that small detail. To be honest this was my second script that I rushed on a day before the competition deadline.
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Nigel Sheppard(Wednesday, 25 July 2012 16:42)
This to me was very cliche'd, abusive drunk husband, charming man leading his beautiful wife away, and the beautiful wife killing the abusive drunk husband to be with said charming man. Told well
enough, but it's been told many times before.
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John (Monday, 23 July 2012 09:22)
This missed the brief by not being set on Valentine's Day.
Martin White (Monday, 23 July 2012 15:44)
Opps yeah I may forgotten about adding that small detail. To be honest this was my second script that I rushed on a day before the competition deadline.
Nigel Sheppard (Wednesday, 25 July 2012 16:42)
This to me was very cliche'd, abusive drunk husband, charming man leading his beautiful wife away, and the beautiful wife killing the abusive drunk husband to be with said charming man. Told well enough, but it's been told many times before.