A great opening, really captivating, but then I get lost at the seemingly strained relationship with his mother, and the relevance of the Japanese girl. Then it just ends without any resolve.
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Craig(Tuesday, 24 July 2012 22:32)
Don't know what you were trying to say? Sorry didn't get it.
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Nigel Sheppard (Monday, 23 July 2012 08:11)
A great opening, really captivating, but then I get lost at the seemingly strained relationship with his mother, and the relevance of the Japanese girl. Then it just ends without any resolve.
Craig (Tuesday, 24 July 2012 22:32)
Don't know what you were trying to say? Sorry didn't get it.