'Enough' by Rock the Boat
(Montreal, CA) Second Edit
The crew and cast were put together via word of mouth and 1 online ad.
It was filmed on a Canon 60D camera at the main actor's (Rachel Chenus) condo with sound editing done by a crew I haven't even met yet.
Read 'Enough' HERE
First Cut Comments... have YOUR say!
'Enough' by Rock the Boat
(Montreal, CA) First Edit
First cut: Producers notes for the filmmakers
- Remove titles and tighten the edit
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#1
nice short, work on the sound design and grading. the acting is really good.
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#2
If I remember right, one suggestion during the script rewrite process was to reveal her engagement later. I would suggest doing the same here. Keep things a bit vague until the reveal at the end. At the moment the story plays out linearly but I think you can still inject some intrigue by removing a couple lines of dialogue. Nicely shot and acted. And yeah, lose the opening titles.
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#3
Think the credits at the beginning need to go. Takes away from the opening of the story and the sound needs a bit of work, especially towards the end. Not to sure about the shot at the end either with him looking up at them, feels a little awkward. Other than that it flows well and the performances are good. Like it.
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#4
id agree with the credits going - was my first thought - struggled with some sound too but the acting is good
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#5
Seems like inexperienced crew shot this. Acting is weak , camera and boom op no experience.
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#6
There is something natural about this film...very smooth..i would work on the grading, there is something weird beginning from timecode 02:00..so i would work on the editing towards the end. It seems like you have some unnecessary shots.
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