'Jealous Making' by Palm D'Off

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Comments: 7
  • #1

    Staré (Thursday, 06 December 2012 13:37)

    I liked it.. Good editing, acting, music...some sound problems..

  • #2

    Nathan Gower (Saturday, 08 December 2012 21:17)

    Sound really lets this down, which is a shame, because I really love your take.

  • #3

    Marie (Monday, 10 December 2012 11:54)

    Great acting and set .... Love the take

  • #4

    50kisses (Wednesday, 12 December 2012 11:22)

    UPDATE - the filmmakers exported the film with the wrong sound mix which is now corrected above.

  • #5

    Mike Rowland (Monday, 24 December 2012 18:06)

    It seems to have reverted to the incorrect file again. Correct one is at:

  • #6

    Bruce Thomas (Thursday, 09 May 2013 19:24)

    You should be proud :D A lovely piece of work, well done. I think it has a good mix of every thing, I like how you captured the yearning for the past chased by the replacement necklace, that was a nice touch, and communicated very well, and dismantled the lingering serious subtext. I am not a fan of the split screen, and I guess you did that because of the time restriction? And the last thing ... I the grade could have had more gain, and less red. There you have my 2p. Well done. (A friend of Sandra McD)

  • #7

    Mike Rowland (Wednesday, 19 February 2014 17:52)

    A belated thanks for your comments. Just a quick note to say, the idea of the split screen was to create an artificial division to the 2 characters, signifying the idea that their stories aren't quite 'together', that they aren't really looking at each other, until the pay-off at the end where their stories/screens combine and they see each other for the 'first' time.
    Thanks again

'Jealous Making' by Palm D'Off

First Edit