'Enough' by Simon Straub- Film & Photography

Second Edit

Based in Stuttgart, Germany Simon Straub - Film & Photography is actually a one man production company. For this special event director Simon Straub teamed up with acting students from a local acting school he has ties to. With Sabina Bekovic not only taking on the role of Leila but also helping with the production a very small but efficient team was formed. With no budget the decision was quickly made to film with the Canon EOS 7D. For post-production Adobe Premiere Pro and After Effects were used.

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'Enough' by Simon Straub- Film & Photography

First Edit

First cut: Producers notes for the filmmakers

Music WAY too loud and overly dramatic – try without music or with more contemporary music

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Comments: 5

#1
Stephen Cooper (Tuesday, 06 November 2012 18:28)

Thought it was shot very well and framed beautifully. Think the audio needs a lot of work though. A lot of the dialogue was barely audible and the music was maybe slightly to loud. Good effort though.
#2
Mark (Wednesday, 07 November 2012 12:42)

Thought the acting and the mood was really good. Thoroughly believed what happened. Maybe one improvement might be if the husband to be didn't look a little suspicous. This would play better as just their little secret and husband to be completely out of the loop.
#3
Mark Williams (Thursday, 08 November 2012 20:28)

Really nice little piece, I actually liked the moment between the husband to be and the "other man", but yes some of the dialogue hard to pick out.
#4
Rocko Paolo (Friday, 09 November 2012 14:35)

The frames are beautiful but have to agree with comments above regarding the suspicion and tension between both men should not be there.
#5
Simon Straub (Monday, 12 November 2012 11:50)

Thanks for all the comments. Yes, sound should be done again with more focus on a continuous soundlevel. The music was supposed to cover up a few "holes" in the sound but it didn't work out the way we imagined. So we going to improve the sound. Thanks again.