'Her...and Him' by Tupelo Tree Productions

(London, UK) Second Edit

A short film by London based Tupelo Tree Productions comprising of a dynamic party scene with the Devil, Cupid and a few surprises. Filmed on Sony A33 DSLR and Panasonic Professional AG-HMC40.

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(London, UK) First Edit

'Her...and Him' by Tupelo Tree Productions

First cut: Producers notes for the filmmakers

  • Cut, cut, cut…
  • Loose all dissolves

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Comments: 4
  • #1

    Adolf El Assal (Sunday, 04 November 2012 15:06)

    get rid of all the dissolves. and work on your grading and edit. You can cut out at least 30 seconds.

  • #2

    Evan (Monday, 05 November 2012 01:59)

    Cute short. The dissolves and fades are an interesting thought but need to go. Too much head space in several of the shots like the two-shot of devil and Cupid, which you can trim out in post.
    I'd like to see a brief reaction shot of the dude just before she kisses him.
    Your end credits are more than a minute which is 25% of your overall run time. I'd condense this.

  • #3

    Stephen Cooper (Monday, 05 November 2012 22:48)

    Think the colour needs some sorting and could do with a few cuts to increase the pacing. What is the really quick cut at 2.07 can't get it to freeze frame to see. (Hoping its not a fight club ref)

  • #4

    Mike (Wednesday, 07 November 2012 02:23)

    Interesting film... but nothing at all like the script on which it is supposedly based. The shell of the story (a party with Cupid in attendance) is similar, but I don't even think it shares a line of dialogue in common with the script!