'Red Light' by Good Shout
(London, UK) Second Edit
Red Light was made with no budget on a Canon 60D with 3 dedo lights, some gels and 2 LED panels and a Zoom H4N microphone.
Read Red Light HERE
Second Cut Comments... have YOUR say!
'Red Light' by Good Shout
(London, UK) First Edit
First cut: Producers notes for the filmmakers
- Loose fades at head, just cut, will be more dynamic
- Overal try and tighten, it’s a long time for the gag to sustain without people guessing it
- Great work!
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#1
great cinematography and acting!! one of my favourites so far. the only thing I would suggest: cut out the fades at the beginning and have a few more shots in the intro to build up the tension. great job!:-)
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#2
Liked it but you don't need the OTT car driving start. Its enough to start on with lights changing.
Also I think you missed a trick. You need to make the audience misunderstand his flirting more with him being pleasured - earlier on in the sequence.
Not sure if I totally believe the end after thinking about the early build up. -
#3
Really enjoyed that. To be honest I wouldn't change anything. The OTT start was a little off putting at first but when the joke hits at the end it all works really well together.
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#4
Can't stop laughing! Great job!
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#5
Great job. The music really fits perfectly and the main actor's facial expressions in this little to no dialogue type short says more! I didn't quite get the whole "puke" sound at 1st but guess it ties in at the end. :-)
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#6
Really liked this - but felt it too long and needs to be cut drastically. Well shot.
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#7
When the ending rolled around I genuinely thought the whole thing was brilliant. Wasn't sure till then.
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Samantha Hughes (Thursday, 13 December 2012 21:45)
Haha, didn't see that coming!
A very clever little piece, beautifully edited and I love the music. Nicely done.